It had been 20 years since I had been to Aunt Sue’s house. As me and several cousins sit on the front porch sipping iced tea and reminiscing, I realized that every single memory that I have of being at that house when I was growing up, was a good memory.
From my Uncle Joe always laughing to my Mama and my Aunt Sue in the kitchen pulling taffy. They would get so tickled that they would have to get someone to relieve them on their end of that taffy while they ran to the bathroom.
My family has been cursed with tragedies and bad memories. In every direction that I turn, I will see something that reminds me of those memories.
A drive along the streets where a lot of my family lived, is very depressing when I realize how many people are now gone.
However, here, things stay the same. With the rocking chairs, porch swing and the wind chimes making sweet music, it is as if time stands still in Aunt Sue’s house.
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Writing challenge week 8. The goal is to write a story between 100-150 words (give or take 25 words) based on the provided photo.
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Sweet and melancholy story! Several people have written about the wind chimes. I need to look at the photo closer because I didn’t notice them. Excellent story Bynda!
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thank you! I related to that front porch instantly!
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You did an excellent job!
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I loved the last line….it is as if time stands still in Aunt Sue’s house.
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Such a sweet story with good depiction of fond memories. 🙂
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thank you!!!
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Lovely memories. I really liked your last sentence.
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely, melancholy story. 🙂
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thank you!!
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A lovely story of memories both happy and sad. The ending is lovely. 🙂
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I would like to hear more about some of those people and memories. This seems like the beginning of something.
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thank you! and I have a lot of stories to tell. to be honest, I know this is supposed to be fiction but this story is true to life. I just couldn’t help it when I saw the front porch, it is almost identical to my Aunt Sue’s. Thanks for stopping by and reading my story!
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Nice story about reflection.
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thank you..
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lovely story Bynda – it so reminiscent of most of our own memories of growing up and returning to the places of our childhood 🙂
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Aw, such a sweet story at the end of the day, there’s that one place which Would always bring up good memories. Beautiful 🙂
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