“Pizza anyone?”
Those were the last words that she heard before her world changed forever.
Standing in front of her, the most magnificent creation that God had ever made.
He was looking straight at her and it seemed no one else was in the room.
She knew that her life would never be the same as he walked toward her.
He stopped within inches of her face and she inhaled the intoxicating smell.
She was starting to perspire and her heart was racing.
In his hand, he held the key to her heart.
Hot, bubbly, cheese, with pepperoni, mushrooms, sausages, black olives with a light golden brown crust.
Her eyes fixated on the perfected concoction and he said, “Will there be anything else, ma’am?
” No, thank you .” she managed to grunt as she took her first bite.
It was perfection.
And that pizza boy wasn’t bad either.
147 words.
Thank you to Barbara Beacham for our photo prompt.
Barbara Beacham hosts the weekly challenge, Monday’s Finish the Story. She gives us a photo and the first sentence to base our story on and challenges us to write our story in 150 words or less. If you would like to scratch your creative itch, click on this link:
New Peace, Old Mind 
Loved it! She was pretty well mesmerized by the pizza boy. I think it was a tough first between him and the pizza. 🙂 I enjoyed reading your story.
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I began reading expecting a love story with the man, and I love the way you wove this tale! Thank you for participating in the MFtS challenge and I hope that you return next week! Be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much! I hope to continue as well.
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That makes me smile Bynda! 🙂 Be well…
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Very funny. Great miss direction.
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Thank you for reading my story!
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Good story. She was definitely mesmerized by something. 🙂 I love the final line.
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Thank you so much!
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Excellent story, Bynda! I love the way you build us up to believe she’s drooling over the man, then describe that mouthwatering pizza. The last sentence is perfect, too.
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thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!
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Niice work Bynda ~The lead-up to that perfect last line was brilliant ~ Succulent writng 🙂
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ooohh..I could have used that word..Succulent..:) Thank you for stopping by and reading!
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Great take on this prompt Brynda. A dishy pizza boy only makes the pizza taste better….
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thank you!
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I think the waiter got lucky if the pizza won… To many other pizza in the sea to keep that one at home? Nicely done!
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ha! so true! thank you for reading my story!
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