Clyde tried very hard to get his life back after the loss of his son and his divorce from Sarah.
He moved to a new town and made new friends. These friends were younger and their sense of adventure was more than Clyde was accustomed to.
One night they visited the “haunted mansion” out in the country. Something strange and sinister happened to Clyde that night in that house. He couldn’t quite put his finger on it. But the leader of the group, Jake, thought it was a little too funny. He laughed a little too long at Clyde’s reaction to this spooky place.
Although Clyde tried to end his relation with these new friends, Jake was insistent. He would never speak to or approach Clyde during the day, but every night he would call him in the middle of the night and with his mocking laugh say. “Hey Clyde, wanna go to the haunted house tonight? I hear there are a few ghost that would like to meet you.”
Clyde would hang up immediately.
This story is being submitted for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers, Week starting March 17, 2015. We are given a photo prompt and challenged to write a story, based on the photo, of 100-150 words or less (give or take 25 words). If you would like to participate in this writing challenge, we would love to have you, please click on this link:
Oh my, the plot thickens. This is great, well written, and gives me something to look forward to next week’s prompt. Nice work 🙂
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thank you Cat. 🙂
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Oooh, eeriee 😸. I would love to know what happened to Clyde in the haunted house? And that Jake seems like a shady character.
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thanks! hopefully soon we will know the rest of the story!
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Every time I think I know these characters or suspect where the story’s heading — WAM! You add a new twist and keep me teetering on the edge of your story’s cliff. I love it so much!
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thanks! I am having a blast!
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Jake seems quite vindictive, and you have got me wondering what happened to Clyde. I hope you continue with this story!
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I plan to continue and hopefully be able to tie it all in.
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Yes, me too! I want to know what strange and sinister thing happened to Clyde. I also want to know if he is finally able to get away from these friends. Great story!!
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You have me wondering why Clyde is always contacted at night .Love ghost stories .
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🙂 I’m glad you caught that!
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Clyde will survive his nocturnal demons and doubtless meet some more interesting characters along the way ~ Nice work Bynda
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Thank you!
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I don’t think Jake and these so called ‘new friends’ mean well for Clyde. I hope he breaks away from their grip before it’s too late. Nicely done, Bynda. 🙂
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Intriguing new twist. Can’t wait to find out what else Jake has done to Clyde. Good job again 🙂
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I’m also intrigued as to why Jake only calls Clyde at night?
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Poor Clyde he just can’t win. I wonder what happened to him in the house.
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This is a very intriguing story. Clyde needs to be very careful who he picks for friends. Great possibilities here.
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Hi Bynda! I just wanted to stop by and thank you for participating in these challenges. I sure hope you will continue! I love reading your stories. 🙂
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No…. thank you PJ!!! I haven’t had much time to write but I always rem. my Wed. challenge! I enjoy it immensely!!
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Thank you!!
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